Rated the 0.2 version. To begin with i'm more into the Futa on Male stuff but this game is really fine, here are the things that tilted me a bit:
-If you're willing to put illustrations (like you did for melissa and the Block F Pool) you need to put more of them (or else you can go full text gameplay, thought I'd personally appreciate some good visual content)
-Some selectable options are bugged (for instance the punish melissa sequence that shows nothing for me)
-Less important but still bothering me, the grammatical mistakes like "your" instead of "you're". I know this one is not easy to correct because you have to go through all your text file to try and find it but it would be really great of you to do so.
Overall, good game, both on story and dialogues. Apply those changes and that's a 5 star full support for me :)
Still working on game and very much appreciate the feedback!