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I'm loving this story. Love the fear in poor Reiko. It's like... before this monster even lays a single finger on her, she's already been defeated by her own fear.

First fight was brutal. This time, the opponent is a lot more brutal, but you did a great job emphasizing the psychology. It's not just being overpowered physically, it's the psychological element of facing someone that overpowers you so hard