Re: AaRLs Dialogues: Aug 25, 2013 - NEW Dialogue - Widow
Well... um... FUCK. I see what you mean and Ive spotted the real problem (besides my ongoing "speeling" /grammar mistakes). I have two hard drives on my computer and it seems Ive uploaded the one that wasn't updated at all since yesterday. When I returned to work on the dialogue this morning, I had saved it as normal while working on it, but only on the C Drive. Upon completion, I went to upload it from the D Drive, (the unrevised version from yesterday) hence the insane amount of errors and missing of lines.
[spoiler]EDIT: WELL FUCK SOME MORE! The one I was working, the correct one, is just GONE off my HDDs so the only one I have now is the fucked up one here. Much much much work to be done...[/spoiler]
As for the spelling... The online spell checker (dont have WORD on this PC) I use doesn't separate those Б symbols from a word so it reads it as one word. So if that word is spelled wrong or right after the Б, it gets flagged regardless. I just tend to skip those as a habit. I could put some kind of marker there I guess, like X, where I want to insert the Б symbol to pause. And other words, I get side tracked and type faster than my brain can keep up. Hence the weird missing word or wrong word in a sentence. Amazing what ONE word can do to a sentence!
As for the grammar... Shockingly, I'm horrible at it as are many others. I don't write these to win a grammar/spelling competition. Still some are well below the standard I set for even myself. Thanks for taking the time to correct them. Maybe you should consider adding that your checker...
Might want to hold off on that until I can get the CORRECT one up... Give me an hour or two.
FINAL EDIT: Uploaded corrected version. (Maybe) All is right with this one. Added a few more lines and reread it. Hopefully this one inst too bad...
