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Re: *New dialogue: Night at the Church 07/20/15* by Blue_Box (Auto-play Dialogues)

A quick review of Night at the Church :)

I liked it a lot and it felt innovative. I especially enjoyed the close-ups - how do you manage those? Is it just a matter of setting a zoom variable in the position file or..?

I thought the concept started out well enough, but the boner-meter dropped progressively due to two main things: repetitive moan sounds from her (like, 5-6 per sentence) and just the overall over-the-top-ness of the dialogue with the vicar using excessive caps and super long sentences. It broke immersion for me and made me think that less had been more. You could also use half as many positions and keep them for longer periods - it would only benefit the story IMO.

I also felt the lack of anal was a missed opportunity. Why not drive out the final evil from her ass instead? He seems like that kind of vicar, and he mentioned taking advantage of all her holes so...

So, technically fantastic if a bit over-worked, story-wise a bit over the top but the concept has promise and could probably be made super sexy with a few simple adjustments.