some corrections:
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Intro:"[WAKE]Where am I?"{"style":"Thought"}[Intro0]"
Intro0:"Wait, why can't I close my mouth? My hands are bound as well! What's happening?!"{"style":"Thought"}[Intro1]"
Intro1:Well it looks like you're finally awake. Now I can have my fun."{"style":"Him"}[HOLD][Intro2]
Intro2:"I've been waiting for this for a long time."{"style":"Him"}[Intro3]
Intro3:"I can't beleive you fell for this my trap."{"style":"Him"}[Intro4]
Intro4:"I wasn't planning catching a cute girl like you but it was just my luck you were stupid enough to fall for it. Now prepare to have my dick shoved down your throat."{"style":"Him"}[Intro5]
Intro5:"[SHOCK]It's huge! He can't possibly think that will fit in my mouth!{"style":"Thought"}[ADD_TEARS]"
These would have to look like the following to work:
Intro:"[WAKE]Where am I?[Intro0]"{"style":"Thought"}
Intro0:"Wait, why can't I close my mouth? My hands are bound as well! What's happening?![Intro1]"{"style":"Thought"}
Intro1:Well it looks like you're finally awake. Now I can have my fun.[HOLD][Intro2]"{"style":"Him"}
Intro2:"I've been waiting for this for a long time.[Intro3]"{"style":"Him"}
Intro3:"I can't beleive you fell for this my trap.[Intro4]"{"style":"Him"}
Intro4:"I wasn't planning catching a cute girl like you but it was just my luck you were stupid enough to fall for it. Now prepare to have my dick shoved down your throat.[Intro5]"{"style":"Him"}
Intro5:"[SHOCK]It's huge! He can't possibly think that will fit in my mouth![ADD_TEARS]"{"style":"Thought"}
Typo in:
resistance:"Come on and relax so I can get my dick all the way down your throat."{"sty;e":"Him"}
(fourth line of resistance block.. should be:
resistance:"Come on and relax so I can get my dick all the way down your throat."{"style":"Him"}
And this one might not work, 'cause [IRIS_FLAT] isn't an available command.
restart:"[IRIS_FLAT]Looks like you're almost broken and it's only been one day. That'll save me quite a bit of time if you break quickly."{"style":"Him"}
Don't know what to do to achieve the wanted result.. maybe set her to [AHEGAO_MOOD]?
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Guess You'll take another look at the text, 'cause I might have overlooked some more typos/errors.
And remember: those square bracket commands [] always have to be within the line marked by the " - the winged bracket commands come after the line and the "
