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Thanks, Astounded! I hope to do more, though I'm curious (lol) as to what you mean by 'more like it' - do you mean in terms of content, roughness, having the male character speak a lot? I like to know what I should try and focus on, what I'm doing right and wrong. C:

I have a few ideas bouncing around in my head, but nothing permanent yet. I thought of a sort of execution scene where a woman is literally at the gallows with a rope around her neck and is going for a quick drop unless she can convince the executioner to spare her, but I wasn't sure if that would appeal to anyone. I also thought of a gangbang scene (using Dante's great group sex mod) based around the idea that asphyxiation causes vagina muscles to tighten, maybe linked to the cheating dialogue. (Isn't revenge better shared?)

Anyway, that's enough rambling on my part. Thanks again, Astounded! And just to check, would anyone have any interest in these ideas or want to share any?