Re: LN's Dialogues - Prison Sentence.
guard trigger in intro is basically unused. Triggers work by playing the line, seeing a trigger that does not have an action associated with it, and then setting that as the next line to play. There's only one "next line", so if another trigger is found without action, it will overwrite the nextline property.
intro:"[RELEASE][LOOK_UP][ARMS_BACK][ANGRY_MOOD][Guard][intro*played*]"
will always go to intro*played*.
So guard line is also unused.
Didn't really see much else in terms of major issues - although I saw some other minor crap like missing sentence endings and typos and so
intro2:"Judge%3A That's besides the point[intro3]"{"style":"Him"}
lick_penis:"Hmm, yum, it's so tasy...[lick_penis2]"
pulled_down:"Are you trying to make me beg? Well you can forget it you perverted twat"
first_dt:"This feels surprisingly good...not gonna tell the old fogie though"{"style":"Thought"}