Looks great! Love the shadow detail. Her hood has a specific shape, I did not incorporate / it's hard to balance looking good and seeing her face in SDT. You made good changes to make it match the character more. If you're up for it you could bring the hood up more; here's someone's sideview drawing for inspiration
https://www.deviantart.com/e-carpenter/art/Sideview-Sunday-Spider-Gwen-496450722
And then her eyes fade/glow/airbrush (depending on the comic artist) but it looks like you're working towards that. Looking forward to the finished product.