You can see that the border (thin red lines) are sometimes too close to the edge of the outside line (left and right arrows) and a bit ouside the line (middle arrow).
This may cause the colour to overflow the outside line.
You should be careful to keep the fill borders in the middle of the outside lines. In fact you won't have to mind for this if you copy the outside line to use it as a fill border line.
In fact, I advise you to just copy the outline and use it in the base color and shade layers by just deleting the surplus nodes.
Yeah, i should get into the habit of doing the outside line in one polygon so its in the end easier to reproduce. But i think its easier to do some delicate adjustment if you draw them separately, and i get kind of lazy sometimes
The helmet casts a faint white "shadow" onto the face
I believe that it's an unintentional error (a cropping mistake)
I believe it is because i noticed that this happend on the exported .png file as well
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There's a faint dark shadow in the same region, but it's thinner and it makes visual sense to me. So I've prepared two versions: one with the original white gradient, and one with a re-cropped version of the white gradient. Both versions retain the dark shadow.
Yes that was intentional as you can see in the ( sdt-gravityRush-kat (original).swf ) file. The "dark shadow" was supposed to be a rounded shadow that reflects from the cap, but unfortunately, cause of the "white shadow" you can´t spot it on the hair as it was meant to be.
It looks like this "white shadow" is some kind of outburst from the gradient of the cramp/staple of the edge ( for example
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Some of the details (such as the gradient blur effect) have been lost during conversion. We don't need to publish this file in its current state; we can go through a few revisions until you're happy with it. Just let me know about anything that looks wrong.
i didn´t did much blur effects as i´m aware off. Mainly on the metal ring in the right corner of the cap, the pilot glasses and on the retaining strap from the glasses. For now it looks fine to me but i look into it a little more. The only thing that i noticed by now, besides the ones that you highlighted, is the light reflection on the glass as one seems to be missing.
By the way, you did a very good job on the google glass.
Thanks dude. I´m really proud of it myself as it looked really flat in most refferences i saw.
Thank you both for your time. Maybe its for the best if i wrote the request for her clothing and we discuss it further in that topic