Nodern03

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Kasumi's perspective:

The lull in the fight had given Kasumi much respite. The fierce throbbing in her stomach had reduced to a dull ache, though not entirely going away. She needed more time to recover.

However, that meant Hitomi had the chance to recover too. Knowing that she had taken less damage, Hitomi would fare better against her in the long run.

Impatient with that knowledge, she knew she had to end this soon and dashed forward despite the lingering pain, not wanting to give Hitomi the chance to recover.

Hitomi's perspective:

Managing to get her breathing under control, she glanced up, and was startled to see Kasumi recovered and dashing towards her.

"What, already?!"

Pushed into urgency, she scrambled for purchase on the metal container, hastily preparing herself for whatever attack Kasumi unleashes.

No way Kasumi could have recovered in this short period of time. Hitomi had planned her attack carefully, making sure that her strikes had a lasting effect. Kasumi had to be faking her recovery.

With that in mind, Hitomi was going to call her bluff. In a really painful way.

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Kargan3033

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Kasumi's perspective:

The lull in the fight had given Kasumi much respite. The fierce throbbing in her stomach had reduced to a dull ache, though not entirely going away. She needed more time to recover.

However, that meant Hitomi had the chance to recover too. Knowing that she had taken less damage, Hitomi would fare better against her in the long run.

Impatient with that knowledge, she knew she had to end this soon and dashed forward despite the lingering pain, not wanting to give Hitomi the chance to recover.

Hitomi's perspective:

Managing to get her breathing under control, she glanced up, and was startled to see Kasumi recovered and dashing towards her.

"What, already?!"

Pushed into urgency, she scrambled for purchase on the metal container, hastily preparing herself for whatever attack Kasumi unleashes.

No way Kasumi could have recovered in this short period of time. Hitomi had planned her attack carefully, making sure that her strikes had a lasting effect. Kasumi had to be faking her recovery.

With that in mind, Hitomi was going to call her bluff. In a really painful way.

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Nice, real nice you Tease LOL

All joking aside even though this was a shorter chapter you are setting up for some one getting and epic beat down.
 

Raden

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Shoot me a PM, I'd prefer not to threadjack someone during their presentation. This is a great story being done, the thread's not about me.
 

Nodern03

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Kasumi's perspective:

Kasumi launched herself at Hitomi with a powerful aerial side kick. To her horror, Hitomi had been prepared, and dodged towards her right side. Kasumi hit nothing about air. As her foot sailed past Hitomi, she realised she made a tactical error.

One, she was too impatient, not being cautious.
Two, she did not set up her kick, which meant that it was obvious enough to avoid.
Three, being in the air meant that she could not change direction, leaving her very, very vulnerable.

Hitomi's perspective:

Kasumi's foot shot past her leg like a missile, and she felt the wind on her cheek. If that had hit, it might be the end of the fight. Just as well, Kasumi had been careless, and she knew that kick was coming miles away. As she circled past towards her left, she looked up into Kasumi's surprised expression.

She did not have much time to dwell on it, as she immediately executed her counter.

She planted her feet in, creating a strong base, and pivoted, generating power that started from her feet, her waist, to her shoulders, and finally, to her fist. As her punch connected with the pit of Kasumi's unprotected midsection, she unleashed a shout, a technique to maximise her power punch.

The soft flesh of Kasumi's abdomen did absolutely nothing to prevent her fist from travelling deeper into her body, and her fist drew out a strangled gasp from Kasumi.

Kasumi's perspective:

She felt the fist in her body. She literally felt it burrowing into her insides. It did not help that the force of her punch went straight through, pulverising anything in its path.

She also did not have time to guard against any counter, as her forward momentum, together with the force of Hitomi's punch, effective magnified the damage dealt to her.

One moment she was suspended in the air, the next, she was thrown backwards from the punch. She landed on both feet, knees immediately buckling. Eyes wide, mouth gaped open, her body was momentarily shocked into inaction. By the time she regained control of her limbs, Hitomi was right in front of her, launching her own power blow.

All Kasumi could do was brace for it...

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Kargan3033

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Kasumi's perspective:

Kasumi launched herself at Hitomi with a powerful aerial side kick. To her horror, Hitomi had been prepared, and dodged towards her right side. Kasumi hit nothing about air. As her foot sailed past Hitomi, she realised she made a tactical error.

One, she was too impatient, not being cautious.
Two, she did not set up her kick, which meant that it was obvious enough to avoid.
Three, being in the air meant that she could not change direction, leaving her very, very vulnerable.

Hitomi's perspective:

Kasumi's foot shot past her leg like a missile, and she felt the wind on her cheek. If that had hit, it might be the end of the fight. Just as well, Kasumi had been careless, and she knew that kick was coming miles away. As she circled past towards her left, she looked up into Kasumi's surprised expression.

She did not have much time to dwell on it, as she immediately executed her counter.

She planted her feet in, creating a strong base, and pivoted, generating power that started from her feet, her waist, to her shoulders, and finally, to her fist. As her punch connected with the pit of Kasumi's unprotected midsection, she unleashed a shout, a technique to maximise her power punch.

The soft flesh of Kasumi's abdomen did absolutely nothing to prevent her fist from travelling deeper into her body, and her fist drew out a strangled gasp from Kasumi.

Kasumi's perspective:

She felt the fist in her body. She literally felt it burrowing into her insides. It did not help that the force of her punch went straight through, pulverising anything in its path.

She also did not have time to guard against any counter, as her forward momentum, together with the force of Hitomi's punch, effective magnified the damage dealt to her.

One moment she was suspended in the air, the next, she was thrown backwards from the punch. She landed on both feet, knees immediately buckling. Eyes wide, mouth gaped open, her body was momentarily shocked into inaction. By the time she regained control of her limbs, Hitomi was right in front of her, launching her own power blow.

All Kasumi could do was brace for it...

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The Pain Train has left the station!

Nicely done my friend now this story is going to get much better for us readers, not so much for Kasumi.:grin::cool:
 

Nodern03

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So much so that anti-acids are going to be useless, I look forward to seeing what *FUN STUFF* you have planed next for her *Evil Grin*

Haha well, no amount of anti-acids are gonna cure a fist that is repeatedly pummeling her stomach.
 

Nodern03

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Hitomi's Perspective:

Not letting Kasumi recover from the punch, Hitomi launched a flying knee right into her solar plexus. And again, she had the satisfaction of feeling her strike digging into Kasumi's body. She felt the soft and now-tender belly fold over her knee, evidence that she had at the very least broken down Kasumi's body. If Kasumi wasn't wind before, she definitely is now.

As her knee dug in deeper, she felt a violent exhalation of air from Kasumi. She was starting to drop, her weight supported only by Hitomi's knee, which was sill buried in her. She was never one to trash talk her opponent, but a sense of triumph washed through her, and she allowed herself to gloat, just for a tiny bit.

"How do you like that? It's my fight now!"

There was no reply from Kasumi, only gurgling. That was understandable.

She hurriedly shoved Kasumi back. Partly because she wanted to continue her attack, but also to make sure that Kasumi do not throw up over her shirt, if it did happen.

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Kasumi's Perspective:

Kasumi never had time to defend against the knee. As soon as her feet touched the ground, she was again launched backwards, Hitomi's knee stabbing into her solar plexus. Kasumi's head was already swimming with pain from the punch, the knee made everything worse. Instinctively she placed her hands on Hitomi's shoulder, desperately trying to keep Hitomi away from her. She started to hunch over, gagging violently.
The 2 consecutive blows to the belly was devastating. The first punch broke down her stomach muscles. The second knee dug deep into her solar plexus, igniting a violent wave of pain cascading through her.

Kasumi stumbled back a few steps on wobbly legs, hunched over, arms wrapped around her tender stomach.
With her diaphragm spasming, she is finding is difficult to get air back into her lungs.

"My.... stomach..!" She cried out, silently. Her stomach felt like it had been hit by a battering ram.

"Argh... G-Guuh..."

Kasumi stumbled back a few more steps, severely winded. The force of the knee sent shockwaves throughout her middle. Her stomach starts throbbing from the repeated punishment, her insides are starting to rebel. With the pain threatening to overwhelm her, Kasumi could only bend over as much as she can, arms wrapped tightly around her abdomen to try make the pain bearable. However, bending over when her stomach was churning actually made it worse for her, as she felt the sudden urge to vomit. Retching, Kasumi panicked as the nausea kicked in, and she desperately tried to breathe, but finding it extremely difficult..

Her eyes started tearing, and a blurry foot suddenly stepped into her view. Hitomi was not done yet.

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Kargan3033

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Hitomi's Perspective:

Not letting Kasumi recover from the punch, Hitomi launched a flying knee right into her solar plexus. And again, she had the satisfaction of feeling her strike digging into Kasumi's body. She felt the soft and now-tender belly fold over her knee, evidence that she had at the very least broken down Kasumi's body. If Kasumi wasn't wind before, she definitely is now.

As her knee dug in deeper, she felt a violent exhalation of air from Kasumi. She was starting to drop, her weight supported only by Hitomi's knee, which was sill buried in her. She was never one to trash talk her opponent, but a sense of triumph washed through her, and she allowed herself to gloat, just for a tiny bit.

"How do you like that? It's my fight now!"

There was no reply from Kasumi, only gurgling. That was understandable.

She hurriedly shoved Kasumi back. Partly because she wanted to continue her attack, but also to make sure that Kasumi do not throw up over her shirt, if it did happen.

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Kasumi's Perspective:

Kasumi never had time to defend against the knee. As soon as her feet touched the ground, she was again launched backwards, Hitomi's knee stabbing into her solar plexus. Kasumi's head was already swimming with pain from the punch, the knee made everything worse. Instinctively she placed her hands on Hitomi's shoulder, desperately trying to keep Hitomi away from her. She started to hunch over, gagging violently.
The 2 consecutive blows to the belly was devastating. The first punch broke down her stomach muscles. The second knee dug deep into her solar plexus, igniting a violent wave of pain cascading through her.

Kasumi stumbled back a few steps on wobbly legs, hunched over, arms wrapped around her tender stomach.
With her diaphragm spasming, she is finding is difficult to get air back into her lungs.

"My.... stomach..!" She cried out, silently. Her stomach felt like it had been hit by a battering ram.

"Argh... G-Guuh..."

Kasumi stumbled back a few more steps, severely winded. The force of the knee sent shockwaves throughout her middle. Her stomach starts throbbing from the repeated punishment, her insides are starting to rebel. With the pain threatening to overwhelm her, Kasumi could only bend over as much as she can, arms wrapped tightly around her abdomen to try make the pain bearable. However, bending over when her stomach was churning actually made it worse for her, as she felt the sudden urge to vomit. Retching, Kasumi panicked as the nausea kicked in, and she desperately tried to breathe, but finding it extremely difficult..

Her eyes started tearing, and a blurry foot suddenly stepped into her view. Hitomi was not done yet.

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The Pain Train has no brakes!:grin:

Maybe the reason for this fight is a case of misplaced affection on Hitomi's part?:wink: because I can see this going full S&M mode:cool:
 

Nodern03

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Hitomi's perspective:

While Kasumi was struggling to breathe and not vomit, Hitomi shoots forward with a straight right, her fist connecting with Kasumi's forehead. Kasumi's head snapped back from the punch, arms flailing and staggering back a few steps.

Hitomi had deliberately aimed for her forehead instead of her temple or chin; a shot to the forehead, while painful, does the least damage out of the other options. She didn't want it to end quickly; she wanted the fight to drag out, to show her dominance.

And so, she waited patiently as Kasumi recovered enough for the shot, planning where she would land her fist next.



Kasumi's perspective:

"Damn it..!"

Having a really terrible stomachache was bad enough, now she had a headache to deal with.

As she staggered back from the punch, Kasumi knew she was losing badly. She had to take back the advantage somehow.

Her senses reeling, Kasumi desperately dug deep in, searching for the strength to fire back.

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As Hitomi confidently advanced towards her, Kasumi kept staggering backwards, hunched over with her left arm cradling her stomach. Her headache might have subsided, but everytime she tried standing up straight, her stomach protested violently, and she had to bend over again so that the pain did not overwhelm her.

When Hitomi stepped into her range, she threw caution into the wind, throwing a right hook at her, hoping that even if it did not connect, it would at least keep Hitomi away while she tried to get back her breath.

Her punch, unsurprisingly, was blocked.



Hitomi's perspective:

Hitomi's confidence was soaring. Kasumi couldn't even stand straight, her arms barely able to maintain a guard. When she threw a punch at her, the speed and power was but a fraction of what Kasumi would normally unleash.

A side of her pitied the state of Kasumi; the fight was all but won. All she needed was just one more strike, and she was sure that the match would be over.

She lazily swatted her punch out of the way.

Kasumi had left herself wide open.

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Kargan3033

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She didn't want it to end quickly; she wanted the fight to drag out, to show her dominance.

I knew this was going to go full S&M mode:cool::tongue:

But all joking aside you are setting up the fight to be a slow execution of ass kicking on Hitomi's part which is going to be interesting unless Kasumi goes full *cheese* mode and pulls off the upset of the decade.

Well done Nodern03:wink:
 

Nodern03

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I knew this was going to go full S&M mode:cool::tongue:

But all joking aside you are setting up the fight to be a slow execution of ass kicking on Hitomi's part which is going to be interesting unless Kasumi goes full *cheese* mode and pulls off the upset of the decade.

Well done Nodern03:wink:

Well, Hitomi has already figured out her gameplan, and she knows Kasumi's weak spots by now. :D
 

Nodern03

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Nice, so for the looks of things and what you have said it seems like Hitomi is one of your fav gals.

So I have to ask how *badly* is Kasumi going to *suffer*?

Well.... Actually Kasumi is my most fav gal. That doesn't mean she gets preferential treatment. =)

How badly is she going to suffer?

Let's put it this way: even if she did win the match, she probably will need at least a week before she is just able to stand straight.
 

Kargan3033

Club Regular
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Well.... Actually Kasumi is my most fav gal. That doesn't mean she gets preferential treatment. =)

How badly is she going to suffer?

Let's put it this way: even if she did win the match, she probably will need at least a week before she is just able to stand straight.


Really, ok then I'm glad to see that you play *fairly* when it comes to gals getting a beat down, I'm so looking forward to seeing how this turns out, thank you for your hard work, I'm sure that the others here also enjoy this fine story.
 

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