Thanks, both of you! I sort of set out to make it very visceral and rough. That's how I fantasized it, so it fit for me. C:
I wrote it with her arms on his legs, although I didn't really take it into account. I'll keep that in mind, in future. Don't feel bad. That's what it's written for, after all! If you feel bad for just reading it, I must be a horrible pervert, heh. See, I like the darker, rougher stuff - some degree of sadism/masochism, choking/breathplay, bondage, things like that. It's furries and characters from beloved kid's TV shows being used as sex toys that disturbs me. But, to each their own, eh? Anyway, as long as it was enjoyable, if a bit disturbing. 8D