Curious Dialogues (3 Viewers)

[astounded]

Thanks for asking.
I like 'Defiance' because
- She is his 'pet'
- Her change to submission and pleading (reluctant submission)
- Master/Slave relationship
- Debasing her
- Rough

I like your idea of an execution in progress unless she can work her way out of it.

Concept background.
http://maryllis.deviantart.com/art/dungeon-of-torture-160034414

I'd also like to see a dialogue that works well when she has a ring gag. This of course requires lots of 'thought' mode but then, it is her thoughts that are sexy.

Looking forward to more!

 

[Curious]

Thanks! C: I appreciate knowing what works. (And of course, what doesn't.) The concept background is great! I had pictured it more being a sort of public execution on a gallows, myself, but that would work as well and makes a nice dungeon for defiance, I think. And I like the ring-gag idea, focusing on thoughts and non-verbal communication. Thanks again!

 

[Shybear]

I'd like to see a character code included with your dialogues. If it's not too much trouble. Lots of people like having an optional code. Having a code also shows the intended starting positions, moods and resistances.

 

[Curious]

I'd like to see a character code included with your dialogues. If it's not too much trouble. Lots of people like having an optional code. Having a code also shows the intended starting positions, moods and resistances.

Hmm, that's an idea. I'll have to experiment a bit and see what I can come up with - I generally write dialogues alone and don't think of how the character looks aside from their position (that is, their arms/resistance) except with the Cheater and Slave dialogues, which actually have characters to them in my head and game. I'd have to think about what would work for other characters before I could put up codes, I think, but I like the idea. Thanks!

 

[Curious]

EDIT: Uploaded a new version of Cheater 2.0, just one that's been a bit cleaned up. I may have still missed things, but hopefully not. Please let me know if I have!

 

[Curious]

Added a new dialogue! I've also included a background and code - thanks for the suggestion of doing that, Shybear. C: Hopefully it'll improve the experience.

 

[astounded]

Very good combination of the background and dialogue for the witch story. It all works very nicely together for a full, complete scene. Thanks!

 

[Pim_gd]

Went over the dialogue, found only a few mistakes - no typo's, but a couple missing "style him"'s and one line was split up into two.

Personally, I don't really like the dialogue due to the fact that it is rape.
If she somehow turned things around (summoning her inner powers and breaking free, followed by reverse rape) mid-dialogue, that'd turn the dialogue into something really awesome for me.
(The attachment has been removed. The fixes have been accepted by the original author - you can download the new version on the first post of this thread.)

 

[Curious]

Thanks, Astounded! Glad to hear it! I'll try and do that from here, on. C:

And thanks, Pim! Do you mind if I replace the main file in the original post with the one you've fixed up and edit/delete your post or ask you to do so, so there's only one dialogue to download? I'm a bit anal (hehe) so I'd rather have only one, but I appreciate the fixes. C:

And heh, it definitely isn't for everyone. Most of my dialogues have some hint of nonconsent/reluctance to them. However, you've given me an interesting idea. Maybe I could do a dialogue where the witch returns from death as a sort of demon/succubus to take revenge on the witchhunter with, as you put it, reverse rape. It's an idea, anyway.

Thanks again!

 

[Pim_gd]

It's my intention to have the fixed version in the first post of the thread - otherwise a large amount of people would miss the fixed version.
As for deleting my post, I don't know how.

 

[Curious]

I'll replace the main file. Thanks. C: And no worries about the post, then - it's not a big deal. People will probably just download the dialogue in the list. Thanks again!

 

[Ryf]

Some nice ideas. Thanks.

 

[Curious]

Some nice ideas. Thanks.

No prob, Ryf - glad to hear you think so. (:

(And of course I replied almost a month later. Fashionable late, no? Sorry about that!)