f93's Dialogue Thread (2 Viewers)

[f93]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/25/13 - RPG Nerd Girl

I was expecting Mirai Nikki levels of yandere.

If you want Mirai Nikki levels of yandere, you need only ask.

Edit: Oh, and I've almost finished the Shapeshifting Succubus dialogue. Except I'm having technical difficulties getting the changing charcodes thing to work in a non-clunky way, so it could be a while (despite the actual content being finished).

 

[Lizoran]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/25/13 - RPG Nerd Girl

I'd like Mirai Nikki levels of yandere, i mean if we could get to that level even

 

[f93]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/30/13 - Shapeshifting Succubus

I've finally posted that Shapeshifting Succubus dialogue people may have seen broken versions of in Pim_gd's thread over the last week. It's so needlessly complex that it apparently spawned new versions of his two dialogue loader mods just to support the stuff in it (which I should link to in the description of that one, actually).

I'd like Mirai Nikki levels of yandere, i mean if we could get to that level even

Any character/scenario in mind, or do you all want an OC yandere? I assume it's to be a yandere girl giving a blowjob to a guy, anyway.


Also apparently Aarl made me a tech writer, so thanks. Now I have an orange name, and literally nothing else has changed.

 

[Lizoran]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/30/13 - Shapeshifting Succubus

Any character/scenario in mind, or do you all want an OC yandere? I assume it's to be a yandere girl giving a blowjob to a guy, anyway.

Something like she's trying to take you away from your girlfriend, Her being a stalker or a friend or your older sister(definitely not younger sister, there's already enough of that), something like that

 

[f93]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/30/13 - Shapeshifting Succubus

Something like she's trying to take you away from your girlfriend, Her being a stalker or a friend or your older sister(definitely not younger sister, there's already enough of that), something like that

TorqueAOD posted a couple of decent yandere dialogues, including Yandere.txt, which is about a yandere girl blackmailing a guy to break up with his girlfriend by using photos after he got drunk and had sex with her. There's also Other Girl and Devoted Slave, which I remember being along similar lines. Definitely worth checking out if you're a fan of that sort of thing.
Even I've written a "younger sister" one now (she's one of the forms the Succubus can take), and that's about the best I could hope to do for an incest dialogue. If it's not meant to be a particular character from something, I'll see what i can come up with.

 

[darkcrazy]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/30/13 - Shapeshifting Succubus

About shapeshifting succubus dialogue, she does change her appearance after the first ejaculation, but her dialogue is still stuck in disguise mode.
I don't fully understand how it works, so I just put [rdfalse] in restartdisguise:"[rd*reveal*]", and it works like a charm.

I also notice the window of opportunity for choosing her shape is a bit short. I only have few second to put his penis into her mouth after she describes a shape.

Anyway, it's a great dialogue and an interesting concept. I enjoyed it.

 

[f93]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/30/13 - Shapeshifting Succubus

About shapeshifting succubus dialogue, she does change her appearance after the first ejaculation, but her dialogue is still stuck in disguise mode.
I don't fully understand how it works, so I just put [rdfalse] in restartdisguise:"[rd*reveal*]", and it works like a charm.

She's meant to be in Succubus appearance with Disguise lines at that point, yes. Although it would probably make sense for her to flip to Succubus lines at that point, yeah. Maybe I should change it.

Edit: On closer inspection, she actually flips to succubus lines after the reveal bit (where she explains to pull her up if you want her to change form). These lines play exactly once - on the first disguise restart, after he cums (so she's in succubus appearance already). This is because I originally had her changing form at the start of the rdf lines, but apparently loading a charcode ends the current conversation immediately (no other lines can be triggered after) - careful checking will reveal that every single loading of charcodes is done on a line where she stops talking (telepathically or otherwise). So apparently that's a workaround.

I also notice the window of opportunity for choosing her shape is a bit short. I only have few second to put his penis into her mouth after she describes a shape.

The menus loop if you don't pick anything - the last thing she says is that she's angry at you for not listening, then she begins from the start again. Again, you're probably right that there should be a slightly longer delay in there.

Anyway, it's a great dialogue and an interesting concept. I enjoyed it.

Hey, thanks.

 

[WeeWillie]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/30/13 - Shapeshifting Succubus

Your shape-shifting succubus dialog is awesome! Your scripting method for a menu selection is just genius. It's too bad that sometimes its difficult to get it in her mouth when she's speaking, but still, that's a great way to get choice into an interface that doesn't really have choice input. I also love the story line. I wish I'd thought of it :) Great job!

 

[Drrr]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/30/13 - Shapeshifting Succubus

Man, you're getting more and more versatile with those actions and development triggers. Kinda makes me curious to see what'll happen if you decide to pick up that one Stocking idea from before with so much depth available to the way that dialogues work now.

 

[f93]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/30/13 - Shapeshifting Succubus

bluh bluh Stocking bluh bluh

I actually have been meaning to do that one. It's just that I originally wanted to use animtools to get different positions, but that still doesn't work too well (or, if it does, I can't figure it out). It would be pretty easy to keep it all as blowjobs and have her gradually get more willing (and also strip down, thanks to code I'll steal from WeeWillie's excellent Mistress's Playthings dialogue).
In terms of writing, I'm actually more proud of some of the simpler ones I've done. I'm probably approaching the point of having too much complexity when it starts looking like a good idea to build a short visual novel in SDT (which is basically what the "Campaign" dialogues are going to be, if the various writers involved can agree on what the main storyline is going to be).

 

[WeeWillie]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/30/13 - Shapeshifting Succubus

So what is this Stocking project that's been mentioned. Is this some anime character I'm not familiar with (which would be most anime characters :P)

 

[f93]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/30/13 - Shapeshifting Succubus

So what is this Stocking project that's been mentioned. Is this some anime character I'm not familiar with (which would be most anime characters :P)

Stocking Anarchy, the cake-loving angel girl with magical stockings that turn into swords, from Panty & Stocking (With Garterbelt). Drrr requested a dialogue of her having to take the place of her sister (Panty) in a porn shoot that she was absent for.
Basically, yeah. Anime character.

Edit: Doesn't really warrant a new post by itself, but I added Feferi to the Homestuck dialogues thread.

 

[Slingerbult]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 11/30/13 - Shapeshifting Succubus

In terms of writing, I'm actually more proud of some of the simpler ones I've done. I'm probably approaching the point of having too much complexity when it starts looking like a good idea to build a short visual novel in SDT (which is basically what the "Campaign" dialogues are going to be, if the various writers involved can agree on what the main storyline is going to be).

^This. When I started writing dias, innovation consisted in doing a lot with very little. Thanks to recent mods, dias are no longer limited, so I think now the challenge is rather how we can make it more simple and robust. EVERY dialogue must not contain stripping, user menu choice, position changing and a built-in mini games at the SAME time :) These days, we can afford to let concept come first and lend to the concept the functionality that fits. I'm gonna start thinking smaller and neater. But better. I'm also VERY happy to see advanced writers borrowing code features from each other :)

 

[f93]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 12/23/13 - Starbound: Captured by a Floran

Well, back to my roots with a simple dialogue. About a carnivorous alien plant-girl that speaks in third-person and keeps threatening to eat you.
There's also one about a guy marrying what turns out to be the somehow near-identical brother of the woman he loves. You know, business as usual.

 

[GLord]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 12/23/13 - Starbound: Captured by a Floran

Many cheersss for Ssstarbound dialogue. And besst race.

Too bad there are no Floran hairsss. Maybe one day.

 

[f93]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 12/23/13 - Starbound: Captured by a Floran

Many cheersss for Ssstarbound dialogue. And besst race.

Too bad there are no Floran hairsss. Maybe one day.

Floran besst race.
They're also the only race (excluding humans) that I could feasibly fake with a charcode (long hair to cover ears, non-human skin/hair color). So sadly without some new mods (which I can't do, and have no references to request) you won't see a specific dialogue for an Apex girl performing sexy experiments, or an Avian doing whatever it is Avians do.

I'd like Mirai Nikki levels of yandere, i mean if we could get to that level even

I'm not quite sure if I've hit that level (especially since I ended up moving some of the more physically threatening lines to the Floran dialogue), but my most recent addition is about a yandere girl kidnapping a guy to force him to get her pregnant.

 

[Sknaht]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 12/26/13 - Yandere girl wants your babies

Oh my! These are great, and I wanted to say that for a long tie.

 

[f93]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 01/08/14 (succubus fixed to work with DA2.01)

It's been pointed out to me that the Succubus dialogue wasn't working with the most recent version of DialogueActions. Thankfully Pim_gd sent me a version with the applicable lines (the charcode loading ones) fixed. Comments have been changed to no longer refer to VariableArithmetic, and mention the correct version of DA to use.

 

[Needsdcaff_7]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 01/08/14 (succubus fixed to work with DA2.01)

Are you still working on the RWBY dialogue's? I love the Ruby one and would love to see all the other girls :) Great work by the way :)

 

[RubyFuta]

Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 01/08/14 (succubus fixed to work with DA2.01)

Just was wondering if you could make a futa dialogue were both are futas or the him is female with strap-on.
Like the teacher finds out her student is a futas and is gonna hold it over her, or maybe one that is the girl goes to a school full of futas or a futa goes to a school full of girls. ;D