Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)
Thanks for the ideas. There are some good ones here. Some comments about them:
Bruce said:
- The vast majority of lines are thoughts, I think the dialogue would benefit from more dirty talk (this is also me trying to coerce you into writing more lines :)).
I agree, but there is a reason I mostly do thought lines.
1. Only thought lines will fire if the girl can't speak, such as being gagged or having a dick in her mouth. I need to have a good variety of thought lines so that things don't get horribly repetitive if a player likes to use a gag.
2. Spoken lines can be interrupted, while thought line are guaranteed to run once they start. This can be very important if you saw how I implement my dialogues. For every line you see fire, there was probably 5 or 6 actually lines that chained together. I just have to be very careful with spoken lines since bugs can easily be introduced if players cut her off by putting something in her mouth.
Those said, I still agree that I should add more spoken lines. It's just that those dialogues take me so much time to write, and I'm not sure if I should spend more time giving Plexia and Ashley more things to say, or spend time making new slaves and features.
Bruce said:
- Make some followup lines, e.g. "please whip me more" - whip again - "thank you, I can't get enough of it", maybe even requests?
Requests are tricky, since you expect the girl to respond once the request is given or denied. It's just difficult to write unless they are just throwaways (i.e. she requests, then its never mentioned again). Still, I like how you think here, and will try to do more of this.
Bruce said:
- I think you could make her breath heavily a lot in the fucking dialogue (maybe depending on arousal?), it would really enhance the illusion
I agree. Right now I can't just add heavy breathing, but I want to implement a mod to do that. You may have noticed that I had to remove heavy breathing from whipping because of animtools twitches that resulted. I want to fix that.
Bruce said:
- The succubus could be broken in a docile way by orgasm denial
- Orgasm denial play would generally be great :)
That is an interesting idea. I'll need to think it over as to how I'd implement that.
Bruce said:
- An option to pierce her nipples and add weights/clamps to them
The piercing is already listed in my poll under "gifts of jewelry". Adding weights to them would be a bit of a challenge, since you'd expect the breasts to hang lower. Hmm.
Thank you for the feedback.