Re: AaRLs Dialogues: (UPDATED Sep 24th) - NEW Lightning FF13 Dialogue
Dito on the Head Cheerleader - really liked it :) I was even more impressed when I read the actual dia file though. Unfortunately though, a lot of it is lost in game due to Thought/Him lines trumping out others, and the same with pull_off lines. Especially when combined, so in game you hear these two A LOT:
pull_off:"I've come this far. [LOOK_UP]Come on girl. [BLINK]It won't be long now..."{"style":"Thought"}
pull_off:"Come on girl, [SWALLOW]stick with this. You can handle... [LOOK_UP]him!"{"style":"Thought"}
the third has a " error, so it doesn't work:
pull_off:""The more he violates me... [LOOK_UP]the more I want him to. [SHOCK]Whats wrong with me?"{"style":"Thought"}
I'd suggest making resistance dialogue either all style Him/Though, or doing substitutions so that the Him/Thought lines have to wait for her mouth too. And not having Him/Thought pull_off lines (or not having pull_off lines at all).
Just a few suggestion to bring out the dialogue a bit more. I really liked it as is though! :)